• boredtortoise@lemm.ee
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    1 year ago

    “Bonfire!” works as a yell and for the ending in a poetic or lyrical style.

    “The size of the bonfire” is wrong.

    But we could add “Kokon koko?” to include it. Or even “Kokon koko koko?” for “The total/full size of the bonfire?” or “Koko kokon koko?” as in “The size of the whole bonfire?”

    Edit for a narrative:

    Kokko, kokko!

    Kokko?

    Kokoo kokoon koko kokko.

    Koko kokkoko?

    Koko kokko.

    Kokon koko koko?

    Kokon kokoinen kokko, Kokko.


    And in English:

    Kokko, the bonfire!

    The bonfire?

    Gather together the whole bonfire.

    The whole bonfire?

    The whole bonfire.

    The total size of the bonfire?

    A bonfire-sized bonfire, Kokko.