But for real, I think she needs an editor. For all the problematic content the Harry Potter books still worked to the end as a story. Everything past that completely flew off any rails and I have the feeling there is nobody anymore who tells her “no, that doesn’t make any sense you should rewrite this”.
If you line all the books up next to each other on a shelf, you can see the exact moment she either stopped having an editor or stopped listening to them.
But for real, I think she needs an editor. For all the problematic content the Harry Potter books still worked to the end as a story. Everything past that completely flew off any rails and I have the feeling there is nobody anymore who tells her “no, that doesn’t make any sense you should rewrite this”.
If you line all the books up next to each other on a shelf, you can see the exact moment she either stopped having an editor or stopped listening to them.
Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone?