• MemesAreTheory [he/him, any]@hexbear.net
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    19 days ago

    Notes for improvement (no pun intended)

    1. Make the syllables of each line more consistent
    2. Maybe another verse with more of the CEOs misdeeds
    3. Maybe another verse with more of the cops fucking up

    I’m not really musically or lyrically talented, so please more artistic folks, blob-help