• OwenEverbindeOPEnglish
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    1 year ago

    And you have now posted Literature Cafe’s first writing prompt response.

    I like it. The drunken blood pact, the hangover, and the slowly dawning regret… they all make the setting seem real.

    • Throwaway@lemm.ee
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      1 year ago

      You know, I think skimming the nsfw bit really helped it. Helped sell the drunken bit, and didn’t distract by me trying to make it sexy.

      I also realized that the protag doesn’t have a gender, or any description what so ever, and all he has is a pronoun. I think I might play with vagueness some more, it feels tight.